begin the story with the words, “The door swung open” These four words will be included in the word count.
Use the same beginning words and end with the words: "the door swung shut."
Make your story 200 words EXACTLY!
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Dastard Destiny Knocking Dreams!
The door swung open, hushing the noisy classroom into quiet murmur, pussified teacher included.
“O by Jesus; too late!” Quietly panicked Rina, speaking spanish incantations and gesturing cross signs upon the WTF-faced Leodie, who giggled towards Etna, waiting for her usual witty remark.
Soon however, his laugh ceased as godless Etna followed Rina’s command— Etna didn’t even SPEAK spanish! She loathed it! The class was hollering “Uh oh” with the teacher, quite wet in the panties himself.
“I was only joking when I said Alice and Leodie was sitting in the tree, I swear,” confessed Etna.
Leodie turned towards us… and gulped.
He purchased Alice a Frapuccino only to sit down and talk to understand why she bullied Rina so much.
Without notice, Leodie felt a shooting star smash into his face, flooring him.
Sleepy… Blurry… but then a breath of life catapulted him to his feet and fist!
“Wah—” moaned Leodie through his swollen lips, “wha’ wa’ hell? Wam I?”
Etna saw him away on a stretcher as the classroom door swung shut.
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Don't forget to VOTE ENTRY 229
What doesn't kill you makes you stronger, I guess...
This Ordeal has made me learn a lot <(^.^<)
I thought I was gonna die. <(#.#<)
So much can be expressed in 200 words or less. I would be wise to take this to my real writing efforts and stop pussy-footing around with little dis and little dat!
I borrowed from 2 blogs:
the irony tactic, from 1000.Monkey
and the this-chr-doesnt-know-what-everyone-else-knows tactic, from elizabethannewrites
and the Metaphor tactic, from Lady Jai,though I used it on a very small, detailed scale.
I used these "writerly tactics" as a focal point to write this entry.
And then of course a little "Voice" inspiration from people who weren't afraid of adding a "voice" and freeing their muse in their entry: Reinhardt and Zap and Angela Brown
I've read other blogs with the same elements and more, but these bloggers were my "advisers" shall we say?
Thx 4 all the inadvertent inspiration and strategy guys!
Whatever makes you stronger gets you a blog award too! RAWRS!
And thx Naseoul for awarding me with
I'd like to give the same people I just mentioned this reward, because they made a RAWRS that no non-writer could hear, despite its galaxy-shattering cry.
except for Zap... she already got it (curses >.<!)
O! And Treelight!
Good to see you in the WC girl! Everytime I answer one of your Q's, I always learn something,
how is that?
and The Golden Eagle because I think her blog is fun. I hope she can fix her "NASA image of the day" plugin soon.
Things are looking up, up, UP! In this Writer's Campaign Community, you guys are awesome!
Thx Rachel for summoning up enough craft to make this all possible. Where did you amass all that magic from anyway? You must make me become your apprentice!
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